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i sat in the early morning with a cup of tea my hands got cold "where are you can't you see?" that was my heart who's been screaming ever since

  1. #1 Icon15 Lonely Heart 
    heart, lonely

    [align=left]i sat in the early morning with a cup of tea
    my hands got cold "where are you can't you see?"
    that was my heart who's been screaming
    ever since that you left me while i was sleeping[/align]
    [align=left]i closed my eyes to see you with my heart
    and then my feelings began to remember the start
    i've been left alone during a winter night
    i felt so cold without you i couldn't even see the
    light[/align]

    [align=left]i went back home and i held the phone
    i called you while my heart is dying alone
    i didn't get any answer,and i began to wonder
    where's she where's my love my heart's holder[/align]

    [align=left]i felt so tired and then i slept feeling sad
    and then i woke up and i found you holding my hand
    when i saw your smile my sadness went away
    and then i realized her smile can shine my day[/align]

    [align=left]before her my world was dark and dead
    without her beside me my tears will be shed
    no poem and no word will ever tell you my dear
    how much i love you, and it's only for us to share[/align]




    well, my Alter Echodoesn't stop
    written by Dead||Soul

    Lonely Heart







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    wow man so nice man

    really cool poem pal

    you got nice hand and please once you have to drink a cup of tea please leave some for me lol

    thank you

    LP





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  3. #3 thanx 
    well, glad to know that you liked this poemlo0ol
    well, don't worry about the tea just name the time and the place and i will be coming fastly with a tea pot





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    Raise ur head
    try to see the sky

    by the way dont forget to catch

    the moon

    great words

    push our feelimgs

    thanks "dead".

    sis HinD






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  5. #5 thanx 
    thank you sister HinD thanx alot

    it means alot to see your Review .

    for memy neck got tired of watching the moon
    it's a nice thing to see a beautiful thingbut it's a sad thing that you cannot reach it

    thanx for passing here sister HinD
    Dead||Soul





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