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i wrote this poem ...but the ideas and some words were choosen by Miss.Ameera thank you so much Miss.Ameera Tears in a Christmas Night

  1. #1 Icon18 Tears in a Christmas Night (a poem)x 
    christmas, night, poemx, tears

    i wrote this poem .but the ideas and some words were choosen by Miss.Ameera


    thank you so much Miss.Ameera



    [overline]Tears in a Christmas Night [/overline]




    The snow started to fall on my face
    Soft tender white ice falling from the space
    While the Christmas songs is reaching my ear
    And I was holding a pain, I couldn't bare







    People and their childeren were smiling with joy
    while i was walking beside them like a lonely boy
    how i miss you my Angel, how i miss your warm touch
    my soul is dying, I wish i can be with you i need you so much






    I feel cold this world is too dark where're you my love?x
    I wish I didn't lose you i can't live without you I need you my Love
    I passed a guitarist player singing about the happy world
    I shed tears How can i feel happy inside this Cold world?x






    this is the life, i wish i have the power to have you back
    no one can do, i only wish to be with you, and leave the world and never come back
    here i am laying next to your grave, while the snow is falling on my face
    bury me little snow,bury me. I have no desire to live in this world ,cause i've no place




    Written By. Dead||Soul and Miss.Ameera

    actually i've enjoyed writing this poemi may do it again with Miss.Ameera.or anyone else.if you got somthing tell me about it

    Tears in a Christmas Night (a poem)x







    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة رمـــاد ; 17-Nov-2006 الساعة 05:53 PM
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    [align=center]Salam 3Lkom Ramad

    Am really very happy to see our work established here

    I enjoyed working with you too

    N i hope to repeat it again in the future [/align]






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    you have white heart but has deadly feeling when the darkness embracing the light it's getting a great evil






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    Thanx for passing here Miss.Ameera

    and it was my Honour to work with you

    and Glad that we can work togther again

    thanx again

    Best Regards


    Dead||Soul






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    you have white heart but has deadly feeling when the darkness embracing the light it's getting a great evil

    Welcome Hell Commander

    Glad to have your reply on my humble page

    .and about your reply

    not every man who carries Guns are Killers

    and not every Lady who wears a Hat are ready to dance

    ;)

    thanx for passing here Hell Commander

    Best Regards


    Dead||Soul[/align]






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    i know man but

    black=evil
    white= peace
    and when embracing both of them
    it's really getting deadly war!!






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    yeahthey call it the sowrn enemies allaince


    they said under a ceurtin cercomestances
    the enemies may become a good friends

    and that will Bring a Very Deadly result for those who faces them


    thanx again for replying on my topic

    Best Regards


    Dead||Soul






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    [align=center]Hi Ramad and Princess

    I really like the poem, actually the title attracted me the most

    will, I like anything has something to do with christmas.

    Nice Shot you both

    HaVe A NiCe DaY[/align]






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    [align=center]Welcome Miss.Ice Tea

    I'm Glad to have your Reply

    and Glad to find out that we share the same thing

    will, I like anything has something to do with christmas
    .


    i like anything has anything about the Christmas


    Best Regards


    Dead||Soul
    [/align]





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